Article: Are You Ready for Linux 4902

It's just not well-written. As an essay, it fails most tests I can think of, from intelligibility to interest.

That parts of it are completely objectionable on further grounds yet doesn't make it anything less than childishly awful in its own right.

First - know what you are talking about. Second, communicate it.

You are trying to do the second without having pbutted the baptism of fire of the first. The result is simply painful. It's like watching a natural history program "for beginners" which begins "an elephant is like a hairy smelly snake". Well, it is, if you are completely blind, deaf, and have felt its tail in pbutting.

That reduces your audience to that of "the blind who can't tell when an elephant is in the room and a hairy smelly snake is not".

The author, first of all. First understand, then communicate.

It's unclear what he means, esentially because he does NOT know what he is talking about anyway.

We are having to tell him the basics. When he knows the basics, he can start to write about them.

(and Ghooud please ensure that be then he has taken essay-writing clbuttes too).

Peter